Giving up is no longer a sign of weakness, or indifference,
But becomes a defiant act, an act of determination and strength;
When giving up becomes a gesture of giving,
A sign of genuine generosity, an open heart
And up, up, up, the heart goes
The heart which has given up
Instead of down, it rises with what it has given up.
Such things are possible in the erratic stratosphere
Of the Mercurial paradise:
Like a bubble (a belch, a fart), a relief
And a statement.
I give up understanding,perhaps one day it will visit me in a dream...
ReplyDeletefor now i'm feeling my way through your poems.